Kia Ora Api, it's Amanda here and I didn't even know that much about Sea Turtles but now that I've read your colorful drawing I know a bit more about these unique sea creatures. The only thing I'd suggest is you should center your work to make it look more pleasing you know what I mean? Besides that great job!
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Kia Ora Api, it's Amanda here and I didn't even know that much about Sea Turtles but now that I've read your colorful drawing I know a bit more about these unique sea creatures. The only thing I'd suggest is you should center your work to make it look more pleasing you know what I mean? Besides that great job!
ReplyDeleteThanks,
Amanda